Home - is where I want to be / But I guess I'm already there /I come home -
she lifted up her wings /
Guess that this must be the place...
- Talking Heads, "Naive Melody"

Monday, September 18, 2017

I am up to four blogs now.

I am "lack of focus" personified.

Wednesday, July 19, 2017

Need a Mental Shakeup?

One of the books I've been reading for work recently is CTRL-Shift, a collection of improv games for working life. I've had it for a while and flipped through it often, but there hasn't seemed like a good time to try any of the suggestions in it -- not enough time or other resources, usually.

Today, though, felt like a "stuck" day, and I was in a terrible mood, so I tried the acronym game. This involves nothing more elaborate than writing down acronyms that one encounters in daily life and thinking up new meanings for them.

I don't know how "useful" it was, but the exercise in silliness broke up some of the clouds on my mood.

Wednesday, July 12, 2017

Pointless Musing

It has now been two years since I posted that it had been a year since I posted anything, so I guess they do just leave these blogs hanging out there in the void for what might as well be forever.

Which is not to say that I don't think about coming back to blogging once a week or so, it's just that I can't find any sort of focus. There's a million things I could talk about, but none of them are much that I think other people would be interested in reading.

What's going on right now? So glad you asked.
  • Oldest child will be a teenager in just a few more days. I am coping. 
  • I feel trapped in my job, and I can't figure out how to get out of it. 
  • I am working on the fairy novel again, some more, and determined to finish it this summer. 
  • I started a bullet journal, like everybody else in the country. I now have even more pens than ever before.
  • I started meditating. 
  • I haven't had any significant time to just be in my home in weeks, and I think it's taking a toll on my emotional state. 

Judging from my Pinterest boards, what I most want at this point in my life is a clean house, time to write in my journal, and a horse.

Wednesday, July 8, 2015

It has been over a year since I blogged. I'm not sure if they eventually delete these things if they don't get any use? Or do they just hang around forever?

Monday, April 28, 2014

So Much for Resolutions

Though it doesn't look like anyone missed me posting here.

I have the just-back-from-vacation blues in a big way.

Friday, March 14, 2014

Two Chapters Down

I'm really glad I put together that list of Nice Things People Said. It's good to have that reassurance while slogging through the trenches of "should I keep this line of dialog" and "really, how dumb can I be" and "what, exactly, is wrong with that sentence grrr harrumph pout."

I'm pleased with the progress. The first two chapters are tighter. I've added description where it was missing, tried to make motives more explicit, and to keep up more sense of momentum. With chapter 3, I'm going to start a minor rearrangement of events, which I hope will keep that going smoothly.

Saturday, March 8, 2014

Starting Draft Four

I never used to do drafts. I used to just tweak things endlessly and forever and occasionally do a ground-up rewrite, which may or may not have fixed anything, because I had very little idea what I was doing.

Now I do drafts. Drafts have goals.
  1. I may or may not have an outline, but the goal is to get something, anything, out there. Result: one horrifically shitty first draft.
  2. Fix gaping structural flaws. Result: One continuous story.
  3. Fix the remaining problems I am capable of seeing for myself. Result: One story I am comfortable having other people read.
  4. Fix the problems the beta readers found. Result: (I hope) One story I am comfortable submitting to agents.
There are still a few readers yet to report in, but as I said the other day, I'm starting to descend into bathetic depths due to not having a project in front of me. I can't seem to focus on research while waiting on tenterhooks for critiques, so I'm setting about the work. Instead of being cranky because I'm not working on a book, now I'll be cranky when people ask me to do anything other than work on the book! That will be much better for everyone, I'm sure.

First, because I like good things, here are some of the positive things people said about the draft:
  • "very professional"
  • "amazing, awesome concept"
  • "interesting"
  • "nice energy"
  • "a grand adventure"
  • "powerful playing with language" (this might be my favorite compliment ever)
Yay for that. On the less cheering side, I have the following:
  • "way more way faster"
  • "tighten up the pacing"
  • MC's motives fuzzy
  • one reader had a big issue with my version of Gawaine
  • MC "slippery", "flip-flops"
  • sketchy description
  • "orientation issues"
  • "under-described"
  • "murky scene transitions"
  • MC "some depth missing" "don't always know where she stands"
  • some confusion on the magic system for one reader
  • finale "needs more fireworks"
  • "wanted connection to art tighter"
  • "want more drama in her life"
  • why not (villain) seduce her
  • "doesn't seem black"
  • need to know more about relationship with (other character)
Some of them, I'm just plain not going to touch. The villain isn't going to try to seduce the protagonist, at least not sexually, because I think that's predictable and therefore boring. I'm not going to try writing the character to sound "more black," for several reasons.

I'm of two minds about a suggestion to rearrange one significant plot point to come earlier in the book; given that only one person seemed to find the pacing a problem, I'm likely to move cautiously there.

I'm also of two minds about Gawaine. There are smallish things I can do that will improve his characterization, and a few more things I can do to explain the changes in it, but if anyone out there is reading this and expecting Excalibur, they're doomed to disappointment. I'm not at all sure how familiar most readers are with this material. People seem to like the BBC Merlin, which makes my revisioning of the Malory version look downright timid.

Murky scene transitions and readers not being able to figure out what's going on in the MC's head, though, those are issues I need to fix. Even if it's only a subset of readers who were bothered, it's the kind of thing where fixing it will only help everyone. Unfortunately, it's kind of the toughest thing to fix. I know what's going on in her head at all times, so it's really easy to be blind to what I'm failing to put on the page.